Rejected - feedback very welcome!!

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#1

Hi all, I would like to have some feedback on this hard reject, so here is the full preview with 3 edits:

https://soundcloud.com/baumannmusic/background-music/s-OSZpH

The reject was surprising… all my friends liked the track so much … haha :slight_smile:


#2

Really interesting track! Maybe to much “room reverb”.


#3

Hi @BaumannMusic
Wow! Love this track! Beautiful! Maybe it is hard to cut?


#4

In my view the track need some contrast parts. Your track is good but is has the energy feel all the track. Ex : After the power-epic part, you can make some less energy parts. Then go back to the power-epic parts again. Changing some drum sound on different parts : verse - chorus - break - chorsu…It’ll make more interesting. I think so. Hope it help you.


#5

Hi, like a good track, but terribly annoying ultrasound from above. It’s my opinion.


#6

I think It’s good track. Like! The ending could be more stable but It’s your choice.


#7

Hi Mikhail, thanks a lot for the feedback!! On what system/speakers do you listen? I have heard on Alesis and Yamaha near filed monitors and did not recognize bothering frequencies.


#8

Thanks to all for the feedback, I guess the arrangement is one of the main points here. Initially i thought the guitar pattern sounds too much midi style.

Actually I just sold a license of this song directly for a cinema advertisement, so finally I can be happy that it wasn’t on my exclusive account at this time :slight_smile:


#9

@BaumannMusic ,He can be heard on all devices and headphones too.


#10

Hi and thanks again … can you determine the instrument or frequency range that seems bothering to you? I’d really like to improve this, but I have heard with different people on several sound systems and couldn’t make out the problem.


#11

@BaumannMusic, In order to determine the exact frequency of the ultrasound in this track, I need to download it, but I do not see this track in your playlist on soundсloud.


#12

If I should say something, I think too much verb on the drums, strings could be more developed and the highes a bit (like Mikhail said). But for me the track is already great !


#13

Thanks for all the hints.

@MikhailGraydMusic I could find the track with the loud trebles. It was a synth pad from Absynth.

Probably I should upload one more time in the ambient category, then the reverb would be OK :smiley:


#14

@BaumannMusic long time as you’re looking for)) Good luck! :blush: