Rejected?! Feedback on my Fantasy Soundtrack!

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#1

this track recently got rejected multiple times, without any feedback.
I uploaded another track wich i thought was a lot less powerful, and that one got approved.
can you guys please give me feedback on this rejected track?

Thanks!


#2

Sounds niiice! but where is the double bass?


#3

Haha Thanks! But what do you mean “double bass”


#4

My 12" subs are like frozen in time.

With this you can bring them alive again :laughing:


#5

Hi! I agree with @atlemusic that without double bass mix sound not full :slight_smile:


#6

fantastic work! I agree with above posters as well, your lows aren’t sufficiently covered.


#7

Add that bass and watch the sales come in.


#8

Wow thanks guys! Im gonna work on that one! ill upload the results!


#9

There’s a section between 0:32 and 0:48 which sounds decidedly dissonant, in particular at 0:35 and 0:43 - it’s very sour to listen to that dissonance.


#10

wow, I can hear it now, can’t unhear this!
Thanks, will look into it


#11

Oh awesome! I’m so thrilled that this has helped you!!! It should be a very easy thing to fix, make sure you tag me once you’ve changed it so I can hear the new version. I love that you are now able to hear the problem, it’s funny how sometimes we can be deaf to our own mistakes!

I think the dissonance would explain the rejection, and not the double bass thing.


#12

Haha yeah, its so bugging! i think this might be the reason! I just tried for the past hour to fix it, i can’t read notes or chords so its a little harder for me to correct this, I do everything by ear. however, I will keep trying.

Now, im curious to what you think of the other one, the one wich got approved