Rejected cinematic track. Any suggestions - why?

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hello FlameMusic :slight_smile:

I believe that piece is good and it’s not really far from what AJ needs (imo)

I would change a few things, that’s just based on a personal preference…

  • Intro can be shorten, the piece takes a bit long to develop.
  • The cymbal sounds a lil bit out of place.
  • Between every section and the other there are no fx (reverse cymbal, white noise, gong etc…)
  • I am not feeling there’s a crescendo leading to anything at 2:12 also the lead strings fade out is a little bit too long. I would also not let the plucked synth go for that long so the video editor could use this pause more flexible.

Again, I could be wrong with some of the things I said but I will be watching the thread for someone more experienced than I am. :smiley:

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Many many thanks for good advices! I only don’t know if you can submit hard rejected track with such not big changes again…

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Better not do it.
There are rules that say that an item must be changed fundamentally.

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Ok. Got it.

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too slow too sad