- Font update
- Improve Typography
- Keep going!
Good Luck for your design works 
hi there are interesting originalities here though some of them are cool and some of them look a bit weird and got a bit out of your control in my view see the upper part of the shape on the right for instance, wow haro to identify what it stands for and what could possibility justify such a complex shape being in keeping with nothing else in the flyer otherwise …
the qr code is not aligned properly
the typo globally lacks punch, variations, font combinations and originality , too
some of the text are lacking contrast and are thus hardly readable and definitely not popping out like “touch”, “choose” or “about”. I think that underlying texts in the right part would be a good idea , too but with a smooth shadow so that this is springing out more but keeping the same kind of harmony all the same
the logo is not completely exactly positioned well
the main title is not popping enough and should be more outstanding one way or another