Rejected After effects project. Please help.

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#1

"We receive a lot of business/corporate capability-themed animations and therefore we’re very strict when reviewing these kinds of projects. Because there is so much competition in this genre, we only accept projects that we feel provide exceptional design quality and execution. Unfortunately, this project does not meet our high standards for this kind of style."
What do i need to improve on this project?
@MotionRevolver ?


#2

Hey Eduard! It looks like you have a great start here. The design is well-done, but the execution is lacking complexity. I’d recommend keeping the camera motions the same, but each time it pans to a new scene, have the graphics/boxes animate onto the screen to create a more dynamic, fluid feel. Right now, it’s just a bit too simple.


#3

Yes, & also add details… line elements etc… The better designs stand out because of those little added details which will give it a unique personality.