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Good afternoon. The work is done in Premier Pro. Please tell me why it was declined. Thank You!

Hi. I guess it´s very simple about design. Look other examples on videohive to see the difference. I think it needs more detail elements on screen, small details that can help about design, different geometric shapes (not only squares), lines, etc, because looks a bit empty. And in my opinion transitions are very simple, maybe more sequenced layers could help. Good Luck!