Reject, pls help with my rejected corp house track >__<

Hi, kids)
I wrote my first edm track several days ago, it was aprooved, so this is my second one, but I’m still very fresh on this field… so how do you think what is wrong with this track?

thank you very very much for your comments) >__<

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I think in centre melody you need create another (commercial) melody )))

Gonna agree with WildLion, mix sounds ok, balanced good enough, but i just can’t feel it as commercial melody. Summer is fun, but bridge section is kinda sad. And again, i can’t 100% be right on this one (there is also sad summer nights lol).
Summer Inspiration Night Pop sound fine :smiley:
Good job anyway, keep it up! Lucks on you.