Hi every everyone, unaccepted reject, last was 3 month ago! i decide great this topic to analyse track, and rework and resubmit it after , just for experiment! Lets consider this together!
Listen to the track and notice on your opinion what wrong with it!
My suggestions about it! i did wrote bass line, i’ve listen similar without bass line, and have been approved, so i think the no bass line is not reason for reject!
Second! The acoustic guitar strum i guess to loud and have aggressive attack, maybe its one of reasons to dyne the track!
3 one! Legato stings , maybe it are to synthesis, i dont use string liblaries, because i suppose that in this track i dont need super natural sound of string! But its second reason for reject!
Mixing! Not briliant, but quite ok, i have tracks with worse mixing but they approved and have sales! maybe quality standards grow up!
Maybe the main muted guitar need changes in some parts, maybe the same pattern is listening to annoyingly!
In general its good track! and interesting if i reworked it, they will unproved or not!
Maybe its will be interesting for someone else! Lets do it together!