Hi, I’ve also got my first submission rejected, and it kind of reassures me to see that I’m not the only one. Especially as your production seems to be at high level!
I really enjoyed the Fun Kip hop track:slight_smile:
I would say that in your hiphop beat, the voice is a bit too repetitive and becomes irritating -to my ears at least- after some time. Also the transition at 0:49 might be a bit too slow to come, it is a bit frustrating.
I hope this helps… I think we are not allowed to post our tracks here, but you can check on my portfolio (I am new here , so only a few tracks), you’ll quickly see a hiphop beat that has been accepted - if this can help you.