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So now you have 2 accounts or are you a copy cat?

hi there is a lack of finition if u ask me. The shadowing is close to non existing at this stage ,which results in having elements brought together rather than composed for the moment. There is something fundamentally incoherent when it comes to the interaction between the back and the model … the u have the right part of the man’s face being blue , while being u have a red-orange color, just like the other side … this is strange. Moreover, the background is still rather simple and a bit raw at this time, if u ask me. The place dedicated to the club name is insufficient as far as marketing matters are all about