PSD rejected, need your feedback


#1

HI,

my last psd rejected after 9 day for review. the message is

“Your template has a good start and this is definitely and improvement but, as we have high standards, you will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as graphics, layout, colors, etc. Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for ThemeForest.”

https://redpen.io/qsd42cbe125eebccc1

I need your suggestion to improve this psd.
all reply will be appreciated

Thanks


#2

hi for me it looks nice but maybe , u could have a little better / more work with icons , this is would help to make the file more outstanding and trendy in my view …


#3

Yes, looks good, but the face image is too big, on the first one, and the text is virtually impossible to read.

The text is suffering elsewhere as well, but the first is the worst. :ghost:

I would try adjusting colors on some of the text, or adding gradient layers underneath to soften it, (gradient layers are risky, since it restricts what image the custemer can use)?

:sunglasses:


#4

@n2n44
@tmcom

Thank you so much :smiley:


#5

please give me another feedback else. :blush:


#6

please another help, i can not find yet :joy:


#7

Link is broken