please tell me what doesn’t fit? Cinematic/Dark,Suspense/Classic

Hi. For the first track.The distorted lead is way too loud and more too omnipresent in the track.Usually, it’s purpose is to be used as so called braams.Needs to have a sudden, abrupt appearance in order to create suspense and anxiety mood.Especially for horror-thriller genre which i suppose you upload it.Try to play a bit more with alternating dynamics and melodies.The song doesn’t go anywhere.It’s pretty much static.
2. For the next 2 songs. They do have some appealing chord progressions, still they do not develop enough.The tracks need to be expressive,to build up towards something.You have a good starting point, but they lack the build in order to have a beggining, a middle and a finish point.Hope that helps.Cheers and good luck.

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not bad, try harder and keep a consistent portfolio, do what you love, not what sells

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