Hi. For the first track.The distorted lead is way too loud and more too omnipresent in the track.Usually, it’s purpose is to be used as so called braams.Needs to have a sudden, abrupt appearance in order to create suspense and anxiety mood.Especially for horror-thriller genre which i suppose you upload it.Try to play a bit more with alternating dynamics and melodies.The song doesn’t go anywhere.It’s pretty much static.
2. For the next 2 songs. They do have some appealing chord progressions, still they do not develop enough.The tracks need to be expressive,to build up towards something.You have a good starting point, but they lack the build in order to have a beggining, a middle and a finish point.Hope that helps.Cheers and good luck.
not bad, try harder and keep a consistent portfolio, do what you love, not what sells