Please review this design which is approved in Themeforest recently. This is a design from my friend. I am very much inspired to be an author. Need suggestion based on this design.
My Friend’s Design: http://tahsinportfolio.com/Kaila/
Couple of days back I got a hard reject on this design.
My Design: http://designs.obaak.com/html/strategy/
Please compare and give me effective suggestion. Your selfless effort will help an unemployed person to earn his livelihood.
Thanks in Advance!!!