I will submit this logo template to the Graphic River.
But before submitting I am asking for your help.
Please review my logo and tell me which text should I use with the logo?
How can I improve this logo to GR quality standard
Hi there. There is a huge difference between a logo and an illustration. Logo should have a conciseness and an interesting idea. I don’t see this in your “logo”, it’s just a second-rate illustration. You just took one element and placed it on top of another one. And it’s all. The logo should be concise. You have not worked through the elements. Try to make the lines of one element move to the lines of another one element. Also, you did not fix the problem that @DesignSomething wrote to you about: “You have very thin lines in dna element.”
Thank you so much for your criticism. I will try to intricate the DNA sign into the leafs. Should I use only stroke and no fill to make the lines move one item to one item? Or I should work on this piece? Thanks.
There is still no any selection. Everything is sketched haphazardly. This is a logo, each line should be justified. You have exacerbated the “thin lines” problem even more. It seems that either you have not studied the market, or you studied poorly without making conclusions. Words are also randomly located. They are not aligned
the last try ti by far the best in my opinion, though … to be honest this is not perfect for that mater and i think that either the execution or the positioning of the dna is just not working in my view …in addition, u still have te same issue as regard to managing to make all part look as a whole …maybe considering playing with colors would be a good ideate naturally and easily just make a link between the illustration part and the text one …
plus , if u ask me the typo is basically too flat , this is maybe acceptable in other contexts though here with th typo being the centerpiece of expectations, this is not reaching the standard yet …
I am thankful for your review. I am trying to make everything synchronized in the logo. But somehow I couldn’t manage to do so. And How can I decide on Texts? And Where can I find those quality texts? How can I determine which type of text I should Use? Can you please share some resources. Thanks.