Please review my design.

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Hi All,

Please review my below portfolio page and give me some feedback. The page was Hard Reject last time now i have made some changes. Please check both and let me know if i need to do any changes to get my page Approved.

Old Page: http://inkowly.com/html/avan/ (Hard Rejected)
New Page: http://inkowly.com/html/avan2/

Thanks

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I think you should change slider cuz like tumblr :slight_smile: and you can use bold text in menu or portfolio filter text. And you must review paragraph text.

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Hi there:

Maybe spacing, error typography paragraph text, etc you need improvement for approved themeforest.

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Regards.
JeriTeam.

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Hi Jeri

Thanks for checking. You have check the old design which got rejected, Can you please check this below URL: http://inkowly.com/html/avan2/

Thanks

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Thanks for checking, Will try to improve those text. :slight_smile:

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Hello,

With respect, this is far from giving a premium feel. The hero image feels sad and dark while typography remains weak. Plus, you have a very few features and pages. It’s the same page variation every time with particles, shapes etc…
Aim for something that gives the premium impression at first glance. Good luck.

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