Please i want your opinion

Befor submit this flyer wich i work very much i want you’re opinion:
I’ve been rejected or aproved ?
In your opinion, what need to change ? Thanx very much all.

P.S - 3D Text it not make with 3D plugin, is just 2 double and moved little. It probably to cause a rejected ? Is editable enyway.

I’m no graphic designer , but I definitely think the problem is with your font pallete and spacing

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Thanks :blush: UP?

To me the text isn’t that readable being white on white. I do like the general look, but text in an advertisement should pop out more IMO.