Please, I need opinions!) Why item rejected?

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#1

I write these songs. There are many I have. But this was rejected. I do not understand) Need help, advice, idea!


#2

Hmm , I wonder why reject such a good job , really cool , but maybe because of the harmony which in my opinion is not commercial . And so , I have no idea (


#3

Thank you for your opinion))
I was once more the refusal(((( I’m at a loss …


#4

Well , here it is ,
1 not so sharply you need to start a track ( with the loss )
2 it is a bit monotonous
3 need to replace the whistle , ( although norms )
4 need to add some fat sound ( pad or something else )
5 and the end a little too sharp ( thought to be continued )


#5

Excellent! Thank you! Now there is a lot of work))) Thank you)


#7

Hi,
As for “Merry And Bright”, try to soften the bells a little. They sound a bit sharp. Or maybe just the high piano notes and the bells together… I’m not sure. But some times the melody gets too piercing.
Cheers!


#8

Thank you!! It is very important any opinion!) Maybe this is the case. Reviewer wrote that the track is not commercial … That surprises me. I have a lot of tracks, they sell well …