Hello this track was rejected for ‘this item does not meet the general commercial quality standard required to be accepted on AudioJungle, unfortunately.’
Any ideas to help improve it and other tracks in the future.
Thanks
I would remove the part that sounds until 0:48. It’s not quite expressive. The part from 0: 48 does not sound bad, but it seemed to me that it was a bit “out of the genre”. This could be funk, but then it would be worthwhile to make a more present bass, maybe even with slap elements, wah-guitar, maybe, more punchy drums. The pulsing pad makes you think that it could be a track in “house” style, but then there would be another rhythm section. So personally my mind remained confused after listening.
Hey 
I think that the arrangement is a little bit poor and not so interesting matching nowdays standarts.
Try to listen top tracks here on AJ, especially in your favorite styles. Try to achieve that quality and sound. Your music must meet the profession standarts and have commercial value for video projects. Also I can recommend to learn on YouTube tutorials, courses more and keep going to write music. Write the music you would buy for yourself.
The quality of tracks on AJ is improving day by day so you have to match this and permanently work hard and learn I believe.
I wish you will get it!
Cheers 