this corporate track, do you think it’s ready for audio jungle? the mix seems good and in line with the market, I added some parts that change so as to give a little variety. thanks
The melody that starts at 0:39 (I don’t know what kind of instrument it is) is almost inaudible. So it seems that 40 seconds have passed from begining and nothing has changed in the track.
And from 0:57 to 1:14, that instrument, which is still hard to hear, is now making some kind of mess in the mix. I mean, there is already a feeling that of some sort of mess from the sounds. The problem is a bad-thought-out arrangement, in my opinion. I mean, there is a bad mixing and balance.
And it’s too repeatable…
(Also, the ending I wouldn’t make so abrupt.)
But this is just my opinion…
Wish you good luck!