please help me reject my item flyer with GR. what is wrong your criticism and advice helped me. thank you!


hi i like it in a general way, like the style but let’s face it … u have quite some work to do about the spacing that is wrong almost everywhere and apart from this u have small issues of alignement and contrast. The typo is clean but not original and introducing more variations or font combinations would help to emphasize the hierarchy of information and give more punch to your product in a general way

if I may know what is meant by the spacing error what?

sorry I am still the first time in GR but the account that I created has long been used

the space between lines in a general way and the way blocks are aligned too …