Please help me my psd is soft rejected :(

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#1

Hi to all:

My psd is soft rejected, please explain what says below:

  1. There is some format issues in your item description, remember you can use HTML or Markdown to improve it.

    http://envato.d.pr/FhB8

  2. Please revisit line height right now it’s too big, to improve readability in web design it’s recommend to use 1.5em of line height, you can use this tool: http://pxtoem.com/ to convert px to em’s.

  3. Typography in general looks pixelated, please take a look on that.

  4. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-hierarchy-webdesign-14947

    http://envato.d.pr/kduS

  5. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11

demo:

Thanks.


#2
  1. there is a broken HTML tag in the item’s description…
  2. you need to ajust the line height 24pt (in photoshop) will be good
  3. he meant that your text doesn’t have a specific font size because you might be resized it
  4. the header headline “welcome to …” is too big , section titles as well … in the about section you might need to make “hi my name is…” bold or increase the font size.

Generally the template needs more work (Typography - visual heirachy ) .

i also suggest to work on the color pallete it seems too old and ugly.
in the video section and make an appointement section , it will be better to make it two colums and add more contenet to it, pricing needs more styling, remove the map border in the footer.

i hope my feedback was helpful.

Good luck.


#3

Many thanks for your help me :slight_smile: regards…