Please, help! Improve your karma!)

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hello everyone!
I’ve got tons of rejections. Please tell me, what’s wrong with this track?

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The intro just loops for the whole track and doesn’t go change or progress. It sounds like it should lead to something like a chord progression or variation of the melody with some strings to add harmony.

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Agree with Abandon87. It needs a 2nd chord sequence with different feel [?], breakdown somewhere, middle-8, which leads into finale.

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Thank you! I’ll pay more attention to music. Is anything wrong in mixing\mastering?

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Thank you!) Yes, music is weak in this track. What can you say about mixing\mastering? It’s my main problem…

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Although I am not an expert in this genre, the whistle is too high pitched. The pizzicato sounds fine, but are a bit out of style. Otherwise, everything is fine.

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Thank you!)