please help comment on my text style

well indeed, part of the main problem with this one, according to me is that , basically , the set amount to one effect being changed color, which reduces gamely the attractiveness and potential commercially of your item … the second major part is that once again u do not emphasize the differences from one “effect” to the other by not putting your item in actual use (like using mockup for instance) nor are u changing the context or background and that the current background is failing yo contrast enough with the text on top of it so that they text and styles are valued and catch people’s attention too. Maybe changing fonts from one style to the other would be a good idea so that differences are highlighted and the potential use of the style is more revealed so that this generates some desirer people to buy the item in the end …

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