Hi guys, after a few times we experienced rejection before, and with updates. Are our template designs eligible? Your suggestions and criticism really help us.
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hi i think that the main reasons are the same as in many cases. First of all the template is much of a deja vu-inspiring feeling in the forts place. Then , the typo is clean but flat and same goes with the hierarchy in the end , too. Introducing some touches of originality and a bit additional levels of reading would help to make the design look more “lively”. There are small issue of contrast here and there and this is clearly not a good idea as not only is this amounting to violating a basic design principle but the useful of white text on a colorful picture background usually means low readability so why having te concerned text if this cannot be read? I personally believe that pushing your yellow a little bit more to a orange would improve the harmony
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Dejavu in this design sense there is no continuity between designs or fonts?
no deja vu means that dispositions , colors combinations, typo and so on are not highly original and have sort of already been done before
hi for me the color is better , even more complementary but for the font i see not so much difference and this is slightly better but still a bit too flat if u ask me …
Yes before we thought like that, so we changed it again with the shape behind with transparency.
Is it better to add shapes to some sides to make it look better? We changed it again before re-editing. What do you think?
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to be honest i do not think that your changes are “significant enough” to be able to resubmit at this stage …thouhg there is a slight improvement globally …
Then, what are the proper techniques / tricks to make the presentation look better?
well i guess i am not the right person to tell u something like this … u should try to analyze who is a great seller in this category and try to contact him or her and ask …
Keep the typo and redo the entire graphic. Use 12 columns grid to proper align your elements. Avoid using too many elements / slide it become busy and hard to read. Use white space wisely. Do not squash images and graphic elements.
After I followed your advice and I fixed the previous mistakes.
Finally, my design was accepted.
After I followed your advice and I fixed the previous mistakes.
Finally, my design was accepted.
really happy for u 
good job
Well done! Keep them rolling!