please, give me feedback. The track was rejected

The track was rejected. Give me feedback. You can criticize.

tell me, please, the main mistakes

Hi there,

You have some nice sounding libraries going there, good overall selection of instruments too. I would start by working on your primary melodies to make them stand out a bit more, adding syncopation to the percussion and accompaniment to accent the rhythm of the piece, and redo the ending to have chords instead of octaves. Keep posting updates!


Thank you very much. Your review helped me. I will correct mistakes in the next tracks