Please critique this track, thanks!

Hello,

I could use your feedback to help me improve my work. Any constructive advice would be appreciated. Thanks in advance for listening to the track below and sharing your comments.

I did not like the transition between 2:17 and 2:18 minutes. Sharply cut off the previous theme and the new one begins. And the end also ends abruptly, not quite finished. but the track is very nice and beautiful.

Thank you, Daniel, for the helpful feedback.

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Good luck! you can make it!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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Nice job @promosapien ! I really like your track. Maybe lead instrument (synth) is a bit aggresive. Try to add some reverb on your guitars , their sound is a bit flat… I think that tgis track will sell for sure ! Good luck dude!

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Sounds audiojugleish to me. Good luck!

Thanks FM. Good advice. I appreciate it.

Thanks Anarcovision, but this one wasn’t quite Audiojunglish enough to make the cut. Cheers!

Oh! yes, I guess I’ll never understand the criteria.

Maybe the synth is too sharp as FM says.

Music is subjective. No worries. That’s why I posted it here. I appreciate you all helping out. I’m taking notes. Thanks.

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Many of the sounds I want to replace. Guitar sounds soft, need more compression.

Thanks Music_Design! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and give feedback.

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