Your track is really cool but i think it is too artistic and i don’t know if it is suitable for commercial videos. Maybe you need to take your more time to listen to other people tracks that have the same genre in AJ. I’m sure you have a big potential cause your skills and talents are very good!
The track is really nice. The issue here is about its utility.Most of the tracks on stock music market are used as background music for visual media.So if the music takes too much space it becomes futile.If you are trying to put a voiceover on top of your track, your attention might be distracted by the guitar solo. Also. ( and this is a useful tool to use on further projects) , try to get some generic voiceovers from internet. Or do them yourself. Put them on top of your track. Is your attention distracted by your music track? If yes, there is a problem.Its either a mixing issue or a producing issue.
This track sounds really good. It actually gives good vibes. As a video producer I believe this track could be used in many occasions. The variations are very nice. Most importantly the track is not repetitive. As someone suggested, the reason could be the brand name or tags used. Giving a different into like the one from 00:34 may add value to the track. They must have felt it just started abruptly, just saying. Hope you create more awesome tracks like this. Cheers!