i produced short Intro with the very cheap earphones i have.
i tried my best to sound my mix clear and balanced.
aaaaah! i am so confused. i dont no what to ask.
can you please say what i am doing wrong?
please review this.
i named track “stomp Intro logo”
For me it lacks low end, the ringing cymbals sounds weird and degraded, the mid-high spectrum drums (snares? or low hard hi hat maybe?) sound too alike and lack definition.
Also, I think it lacks dynamics, the whole thing sounds a bit bland.
I hope you won’t take offense to my words which may sound a bit harsh, this is merely my opinion. But with a bit more work, I think you may achieve a result that will pass review.
Thanks for reply,
I should not offend to the people who shows me my mistake :)
On audiojungle, I observed from this type of ‘stomp’ tracks is they doesn’t have that low end. I mean that main boom boom is usually mid and very low in volume. 
Month ago i uploaded track with good low end but they rejected it so i didn’t added low end in this track.
Can you suggest me any example of tracks i can produce with average headphones, (which doesn’t contains melodic elements, cuz i can’t mix it well with my current earphones. So i want to focus only on percussive type tracks)
Thanks and sorry for my bad English.