Orchestral Track Improvements

This is my first attempt at an orchestral track. I’m new to composing and mixing in general. I learnt what I know from online resources. I’m looking for feedback on what the next thing to learn would be to improve this track

Improve in my opinion:
Drums, make mixing more clean, remove insert 1:16-1:24 (it seemed to me out of place). Make the track more development. At 0:42 and further (as I understand it should be the culmination) and just one loud cymbal is not enough, you need to make this point more epic.
In my opinion, that’s all!

Thanks very much! :smile: