Hi,
I am newcomer here. My first item was hard rejected without any given details. I would really appreciate sincere opinion about it.
Thanks!
Hi there, I like it but I think it needs more work. The drums need to develop a bit more…the stick click is too repetitive all the way through…I would add a few more natural sounding ghost notes and little subtle fills etc…maybe moving to a light snare shuffle or hit at some point. I would also develop a more interesting bass line that builds as the track progresses. I like the guitar parts and the production is nice and crisp and clean…could handle a touch more reverb for me but don’t swamp it…maybe bring the guitar solos up a tiny bit too. Otherwise I get hints of early Steely Dan which is fine by me. I wouldn’t call it ‘Inspiring’ either. It is a more relaxed, jazzy piece really…so I would find a more fitting title. There you go…some feedback…hope it’s helpful 
Yes…very helpful! Thanks! Really appreciate it.
Great, good luck
Sounds great to me ! maybe a little to simple
On my monitors e-piano is little too loud. But I know - they’re kinda tricky, sometimes it’s hard for me to set level for them properly.
Also it’s little too dry for my ear - I mean try to add more room reverb. But it’s for sure not necessary 
I am starting to think that too…I thought that it should be simple but I guess I was wrong. Thanks for feedback.
Yes, it’s hard with e-piano level…Listening on some systems I also got the impression that it’s too loud. You are probably right about room reverb but I generally don’t like much reverb and my tracks always ends more or less dry (unless I am doing for the client and he don’t want that) and sometimes it’s not good thing. I appreciate your feedback and impressions. Thanks!
Yeah, just spend some time on mixing. 
But the best advice for newcomer is always the one - use references during mixing, mastering, even production process. Just download some previews of items with close genre, that you like and compare your works to them.
But don’t get used to it too much - your music needs to be unique anyway.