New reject. Again need your help folks.

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#1

Hello everyone! Hows going ?)
Hey man! Hey!!!
Pss?!) Wanna take a look at my new reject? I`m very hope you give me a few advices to fix that stuff… We all here soon or later got a rejects :))) So if you have a time you can tell be what you think about this work.
P.S.:And if seriously… Honestly i’m not disappointed by this. And im not surprised. Because more recently I noticed that all my work of a similar type are rejected.

What I think about this work… When i got reject a few days ago…Im just lay it down…Take a fresh and clear mind. And today i`ve listen it again…And i listen that i heared a wrong rhytmics.
And what you think?


#2

Hey there.
To my thinking bassline is too loud. And i’d rather make it more… happier somehow)))
I mean the rhytmics, as you mentioned. Maybe add accent to the offbeat.
Overall i really like it) Sounds nice!

Sometimes hard rejects just cannot be explained unfortunately.


#3

Thanks man. I will try to fix those changes


#4

Hello!

  1. Try to remove the first round of melody
  2. Transfer the ringtone to another instrument (bells, piano)
  3. The whole mix sounds dull and quiet (need a limiter)
  4. Try to add claps

#5

Thanks man. Ill try to do those you tell me


#6

i personally don’t know why they rejected stuff like that. it sounds good.

if you ask me, the only thing that I can say is that the instruments sound kind of blurry all together,
due to the mastering you did.

other than that it sounds pretty much commercial straight forward.


#7

Hello!)
Sometimes your guitar sounds out of rhythm…
It’s amazing idea, try to correct it!)