New inspirational track


#1

Hi

Hopefully my new track will get some success on here! Would appreciate any feedback you have!

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Thanks
Graham


#2

Sorry if this comes off as harsh, but you asked, so:

The guitar sound for the main hook seems “off” and out of place - certainly not something buyers are used to hearing, and there’s probably a reason for that.

What are the chords and bass notes at :35 until :46? There’s a lot of dissonance there and that would definitely limit its sales potential as well.

Personally, if I were the reviewer, best case scenario, it would have received a soft rejection, primarily due to the bass notes.


#4

Thanks Fatcat - yeah I’m inclined to agree with you actually. When I listened to it again after it was approved (having had the period of time away from it) I thought similar things to yourself. Anyway - I’ll move on to the next rack and try and learn from it! Thanks for taking the time to write back!

Cheers
Graham


#5

Since the track has already been approved, you can still address those issues and revise the item.