New in town. Would you review my project please?

This is an item meant for the “classical” or probably “cinematic” categories, what do you say? It’s a 1’47’’ piece followed by a short 1’ version called “Sad Piano”. Do you see any flaws in it that could keep it from acceptance? What do you think about the mix and the volume level? All your comments will be much appreciated. Thank you for your time!