New html5 template, need some feedback

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#1

Hello all
i just submitted a new HTML Template, and I’d like to hear feedback of community here.
here is demo :http://lumi-prod.com/templates/dunia/
thank you :wink:


#2

With respect I don’t see this getting approved.

  • The design feels very out dated and lacks modern or premium value

  • There’s numerous issues with design basics like the typography, hierarchy spacing and margins

  • One pagers are also the toughest and most crowded category on the marketplaces. If you want to submit there then it needs to be both unique and individual with stand out features and flawless in design