[New Age] Hard Rejection... Would love some feedback !

Hi guys,
So I was trying to make a song for a category which is new to me : new age
I was trying to make something quite minimalist and peaceful, and imo this song is really close to some tracks that i was able to listen in this category so I have some troubles to get whats wrong with it… I’d love to read your thoughts about that !

Thanks in advance,


i feel lke the main synth pad is to powerful. Also there’s not much going on in the song…even though its a long ambient track it still needs some movement

Thanks I’ll work on that !

Why reject ???