Need your review

Hi, guys!

Any thoughts about this track might or might be not approved?

https://soundcloud.com/denis-gorohovskiy/inspiring-corporate-commercial

Hi! I think that there are a few problems:

  1. Piano theme is not good
  2. Modulation at this track is too specific
  3. Arrangement is boring.
    I think you need to add more instruments and details to your songs, make it more dynamical and interesting. Hope it helps. Good luck!

It feels kinda piano is in disharmony. Like @LuckyBlackCat said, more details on arrangement, fix the piano and I think you will get approval.

Good luck! :slight_smile:

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