Need YOUR HELP! My first track was rejected...

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hi all!

Bit disheartening, my first track was rejected as it did not meet quality standards…

Any feedback to help me improve?

https://soundcloud.com/edu-brandao-666780460/mistrallis

Thanks a bunch!

Edu

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Hello! You have problems with harmony. The bass is playing the wrong note. There is essentially no development. Some notes in parts sound unexpectedly loud. Sound libraries sound very cheap. Instruments are incorrectly panned, EQ, and reverb. The drum kit is out of place on this track. Incorrectly structured. Also, I couldn’t understand the style of the music. This is too experimental and unlikely to have commercial value. You need to learn musical arrangement. Start with something simpler. Work with reference tracks to make your skills progress more.

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Thanks a lot! I’ll try to put together something simpler and start over.