Need Your Help For Music Approval

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Please I need your help to improve the following track: https://www.dropbox.com/s/5vgw5uo2mnwjv2p/Motivational%20%26%20Upbeat%20Pop%20-%20Preview.mp3?dl=0

Why should it be rejected? What is wrong with the song?

Please I need your advice to improve.

SoundCloud link: https://soundcloud.com/user-200533677-176563893/motivational-upbeat-pop-preview

Thanks in advance.

2

Better to upload it on soundcloud or other online service to listen it online instead of download it. If you want feedback make it simple for listeners to listen it.

3

Thank you DPmusic for your feedback,
Sound uploaded on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-200533677-176563893/motivational-upbeat-pop-preview

Thanks

4

Do not use the “fl slayer”. Sounds monotonous. Need progression.

5

Ok EvenM, Thanks for your feedback.