Need Your Help For Music Approval

Please I need your help to improve the following track:

Why should it be rejected? What is wrong with the song?

Please I need your advice to improve.

SoundCloud link:

Thanks in advance.

Better to upload it on soundcloud or other online service to listen it online instead of download it. If you want feedback make it simple for listeners to listen it.

Thank you DPmusic for your feedback,
Sound uploaded on SoundCloud:


Do not use the “fl slayer”. Sounds monotonous. Need progression.

Ok EvenM, Thanks for your feedback.