Need your feedback - Guide me ! No sale

Hi Guys,

Here’s my presentation:

Got approved two days before, Till now i ain’t got any sales with it.
I need your feedback on the design. If you have any pros cons please let me know further. I’ll try my best to accomplish it in the future updates.

Thanking you all for spending your valuable time with me. Once again i thanks a lot you guys.

Have a happy sales…

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