Need your advices!

Hello Friends! Need your advices and thoughts about this rejected track


Iā€™m not an experienced author myself, so my comments might not worth to care. However, the main melody sounded too repetitive to me. Guess the composition can be improved

the sound of the melody from 48 seconds seems cheap and at the end I would raise the note higher

Thank you friends!

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kind of too monotonous and makes you feel sleepy :stuck_out_tongue: