Need your advice on rejected item

Hi all, new member here. Got my first item (predictably) hard rejected a few days ago. I guess the drums are too sloppy, but what else can be improved? Would be very thankful for your advice!

Hey there,

yes, the percussion sound quite off, indeed. Also I do not like the sustained notes. I would prefer at least microdynamics for single notes. Real players would never play a note that static in reallife. Also maybe you could improve the pizzicato a bit? Maybe less repeating notes or so? It sounds a bit static like it is now. At least I would try to avoid so many repeating notes with samples.

Hope this helps. Good luck. (=