Need to check my HTML Template

Envato Authors ThemeForest
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#1

I have fixed typography,color, spacing but still said its not enough in fixing .

So would you please check my site

cyclonethemes.com/demo/html/cyclone

Hope for you positive response.

Thanks

#2

I can only see it on a phone but you have several fixes to make on mobile.

There’s numerous spacing and padding that needs improvement, alignment with blog images, etc

Using (what on a phone looks identical) the same icons and copy layout for both expertise and work experience is not ideal and when you use the same icons even it just seems lazy.

What did the reviewer say originally? With respect even with these bits fixed i don’t think the design is strong enough or offer enough premium features etc.

#3

Here is my review for your theme:

  1. Try to improve the slider. Improve the headings and also slider arrows.

  2. Spacing issues on header navigation area.

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  3. Tagline, below the logo is too big. Make it smaller.

  4. Make the About Us section more attractive. Too much Lorem Ipsum. That separator, below each section title looks not so professional. Try to make it smaller and semi-transparent.

  5. Improve fonts-combination. Use one for headings and one for content.

  6. I think buttons can be improved.

Final note: There are major issues in terms of spacing, colors, hierarchy of the elements on page, consistency.

Try to improve these points then post updated url there for feedback if you want.

Regards

#4

Thanks for your valuable feedback but my reviewer said like that-:

Thank you for your submission. 1. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636 2. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836 3. COLOR PALETTE: The chosen color palette requires additional work. For more information, see: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-color-theory-for-web-designers--webdesign-1437
4. Typography needs improvement.

#5

Thanks for your valuable feedback but my reviewer said like that-:

  1. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636
  2. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836
  3. COLOR PALETTE: The chosen color palette requires additional work. For more information, see: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-color-theory-for-web-designers--webdesign-1437
  4. Typography needs improvement.