Need the community opinion on rejected Children's track

Hi folks. Need your help with this children track. Any ideas on why this item was rejected? I assume the arrangemenet may seem too plain and/or the melody is not that “commercial”, although i was pretty sure it’d be approved…

Will appreciate your opinion and advice.

Maybe the melody is not that commercial as you said. Everything else is ok to me.

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Sorry but the melody is not good! You’ve got some weird accidentals happening in there that are definitely not in key, it made me laugh at first but not in a good way unfortunately. Keep the melodic structure the same just fix those accidentals and it would be fine!

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hi! nice idea!
mmh some critical points
sec: 0:06 - something weird happens … you put a note that sounds out of tone (G Flat? really?). same in 0:50… etc. maybe do a melodic line more simple and clear … catchy- don’t know. From 1:28 it’s ok to me, but you choose an ending a little bit abrupt ?,

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I think because the dissonant note in the teme,too early for kids to understand also low frequences levels too strong ,cut down from 50 K (I’ll catch you on your sound cloud page)

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Thanks for your help everyone. So, there was something with the melody after all…
I’ll try to take this frustrating rejection as a lesson for my future works then.
Cheers and good luck!

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