Need Some Opinions Before Publish

Hello Vediohivers :smiley:
I just finish my last work and prepare to publish
but i need your opinion guys to see if it’s good now or still ned something

My guess is this will not be accepted. The pacing isn’t good and you used the same effect throughout the whole thing. Is this an AE project? I’m confused what this would even be.

this work on CS6
so what should i do now cuz i already send the project