Hi, the bass is too loud. The drums are tiny, harsh and too quiet (lost in the background). Bass and piano are too dry and the drums too wet. The drums don’t blend at all with the bass and the piano in the front. It sounds like we have our ears really close (inches) of the bass and piano and someone is playing a drums track loud on a old narrow sounding radio 30-50 feets further.
Hi hats should sit more in the treble, kick more in the sub/bass (I don’t ear one in your track). Nothing should never sounds eq narrow like that (in acoustic music at least). You need each instrument to peak somewhere more than others but still sounds large and with enough definition (enough low end and hi mid/treble). Your piano could add a bit more definition (just a bit). Kick drum could start at 0:16.
Composition and arrangement are nice (good vibe). Maybe add an instrument before the end (brass, sax, strings etc). It would give the track more direction and feel less repetitive. That instrument could sit well in the mid/hi mid of the spectrum.
I hope it helps!