Need HTML template Review

Hello Author i hope you are all fine
I need some review of my HTML landing page template.
demo :

What do you think about this ?
it’s ready for ThemeForest ?

There are design issues. I will tell you just one, right on the start - the space between menu items is not the same (you have bigger and smaller “gaps”/space between menu items).

Also there are some dots which makes it just worse.

thank you CocoBasic i will fix it .
please can you give me more details?
after review, it’s good for ThemeForest?