Need help to understand hard reject reasons

Hello everyone. Received a hard reject on my first track here. If you have couple minutes to listen to my track, please help me understand what I should improve to avoid hard rejects in future.

Thank you!

Hi @gui_tar_gz!

Rejections are very hard topic to discuss, but just as a listener, I could share two things I noticed right away:

  1. The guitars are very upfront and tight, it might be hard to insert any voice over there.

  2. I had a feeling of it being rather “assertive”, or borderline “aggressive”, than happy. Not that such direction is bad idea, but maybe reviewers/customers would like a more matching description for a song.

Hope you nail it next time!