Hello friends.
Can some one give me some comments about this design? The design on the left was rejected and I revised it to the right
Thank you.
hi i prefer the left one indeed, though the central title is a bit better in the right one when it comes to readability … otherwise u have a problem of cohesion with the central composition indeed as items seem to be a bit pasted right next to each other without managing to create a real homogeneity and harmony indeed.Try to move sideway elements towards the models and combine them tastefully. Take out “free ladies” LOL this is really not welcome lol try to introduce some shadows under speakers and many other elements so that the scene looks more realistic indeed. Increase the space between the top margin and the upper elements and same goes at the bottom with bottom margin and lower elements at this stage for the footer, not sure that your last line will not be cut in the trimline … Try to adjust the color of the model if u really want to keep this one. For me she is not selling much what u have done but if properly adjusted with adjustment layers maybe this will be ok …
thank Bro 
u are welcome buddy 
hi buddy this is slightly better about the model but maybe not the most appropriate yet … u have to rework the color adjustment if u wanna keep this one … the “night” par of the central title is bringing a major contrast issue to the table indeed need to find a way to make sure that this one is more visible and that this is also not hiding too much the “ladies” title part under … i personally do not like the balloons and think that it was better with the disco ball … i do not like the bottles with splashes at the bottom too , as i mentioned previously the footer of the left version was simply better if u ask me, more balanced, punchy and everything …
i globally like it much more than before for all the part of the titles , speakers and central composition (if u ask me m now the titles are pretty good), the background is good too but there are things that should be improved u ask me … i personally tend to believe that the balloon things look a bit old style but at least u could make it harmonious …, the confettis are disturbing in my opinion , especially as they are emphasizing the fact the model is poorly cut and the cut of the model is ruining your preview to say the least … pls keep in mind that all details matter …
i think otherwise that u should rework the footer , for me the one of the previous version was so much better indeed … just maybe take it back and adapt colors so that this is matching this design a bit more …