Hey there
I would like to hear your opinion about this tracks before uploading them to the site. 
- It sounds pretty interesting, but I think that it’s not entirely commercial standard. Too poor arrangement(more precisely, it is not sufficient). But nevertheless I like it.
P.S. Timelapse. Sounds nice. - It sounds bad, there is no harmony between the instruments(perhaps not enough reverb, and “gluing”, especially at the beginning of the track), I can not say that I like it. Horrible choir(by the sound). This track needs in another arrangement.
Good luck!
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agree with @CleanMagicAudio as always nice advices!
I also would like to help a little bit…
- try to do a catchy melody… you need some melodic line. Don’t sure if this kind of electronic pads and sound delays are appropiate here for commercials…
- Sounds weird… I don’t like the same pianos and delays… they are the same from the first track. don’t like much your bass staccatos, but specially the chord used in 0:17 doesn’t fit . I don’t like your “hit” in 0:21 (etc…). You also need some drums…
I recommend you to listen top approved tracks in audiojungle .
Good luck.
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