Your track has an abnormal arrangement.Sudden stops in unnatural positions.The reversed cymbal is really loud , too often distributed in the timeline and it gets disturbing. There are basically cues which you get from a sample library, in my opinion ,and forced glued together in order to form a song. The reviewer took the right decision to reject the track.
Hope that helps.
Thank you very much for the feedback, @Soundtrickz !
Very well argued. You’re right, now listening after your feedback, I really see sense. Thank you so much again.
The standard feedback from the reviewer does not help at all. This is disheartening.
I hope to always count on your feedback. We only learn with honesty argued.